Saturday, November 24, 2012

critique 10

That Night

The picture hangs on the beige wall
edges fraying
aging with time

no longer a clear memory
but foggy and far
a recent goodbye

we are laughing with anxious smiles
young and restless
happy and denied

wearing red dresses as we spin into the night
calm but ecstatic
as music glides

hanging onto our adolescent times
we dance away
avoiding goodbye

as we go back home, ears ringing, faces tingling
it's nonstop chatter
competitive smiles

and now the only reason to remember that night
is one photograph
hanging through time

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